Julie Gray of "Just Effing Entertain Me" has another one-page script competition on her site. The three words that had to be used were -- Aztec, eggnog, and felicity (that was a fun google search, NOT!)
The story had to have a beginning, middle and end. Here's my entry.
"AZTEC ATHEIST" by Brian Burke
FADE IN:
INT. THIRD GRADE ART CLASS - DAY
Where you spent younger years -- round stools, tables. Senior substitute teacher, MR. MUDGE, holds court.
MR. MUDGE
...something out of clay, for Christmas, or Kwanzaa, or what.
No Kwanzaa projects here, looks pretty much W.A.S.P. -- except for JADE. She sports a goth look, black nails. Jade's hand shoots up, eager look in her eye, a smile.
JADE
What if you're an Aetheist?
Mr. Mudge loses color, clears his throat, fakes a smile.
MR. MUDGE
Umm-- then make a gift of no religious significance, okay?
She nods, satisfied with the P.C. answer.
DISSOLVE TO:
Jade forms the rim of a clay cup, indents a repeat pattern with a pen. Mr. Mudge gazes over her shoulder.
MR. MUDGE
Why that's a cup for your eggnog!
JADE
Nope, a gift for one of my dads.
MR. MUDGE
Dads?
JADE
Yep, he likes sangria.
MR. MUDGE
Oh. It looks very... Spanish!
JADE
Aztec. Pre-Columbian felicity.
MR. MUDGE
Aztec?? Ohhh, yes, the Aztec!!
Mr. Mudge sneaks to a shelf of encyclopedias. He spies the "A" book, peeks back to Jade. She quickly looks down, as if she didn't notice. Mudge snatches the book.
FADE OUT
Tuesday, December 8, 2009
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